The Neighborhood Burglary
Assigned to a routine surveillance job in a plush neighborhood, a seasoned woman detective unexpectedly witnesses a minor but strange burglary. Her intuition convinces her there's more to the story, leading her to a larger conspiracy involving the city's top elites and a plan that could change the community forever. She must piece together clues while remaining under the radar of those who wield great power.
Suggested length: A short story: 1,500 to 5,000 words, or flash fiction under 1,000
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Make it yours
Three ways to take this prompt somewhere nobody else will.
- Tell it from the point of view of a suspect who is lying about something else.
- Give the victim a secret the reader learns before the detective does.
- Start with the confession, and make the story about why it's false.
Writing mystery books
Who did it? You get every clue and a fair shot at the answer.
A mystery opens with a puzzle, usually a death, and closes with the solution. In between, a detective (professional or not) gathers clues and suspects while the reader tries to get there first. A mystery looks backward, at a crime that has already happened.
What readers expect
- A crime or puzzle early on
- Clues, suspects and red herrings
- A detective the reader follows
- A solution that is surprising but fair
A tip before you start
Play fair. Every clue your detective uses should appear on the page first, ideally hidden in plain sight.
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